All Comments on 'Married & Looking'

by jusduit

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bg1957bg1957over 19 years ago
Thing's happen for a reason

Good job of writting, I have read something like this before. It faith for them to hook up on line, and both feeling neglected, married, and looking. How many of us feel this way also, if only we could be so lucky for it to work out this way for us. I'm sure I would end up divorced or worst "dead" (ha ha) if my wife was to find out. Keep up the good work

ryu77ryu77over 19 years ago
Hot affair!

I guess having an affair can be tempting sometimes? All I can say is that I liked the ending.

Thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Pina Coladas

I liked it. Another marriage saved.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Does anybody re-read their stories???

I really liked the story, but again as with what happens with so many authors, they don't ever re-read their own stories to make sure there are no errors, and that the story makes sense...In this case, even the comment by the author at the end of the story has a mistake....if you're gonna write something.....read it out loud to yourself to proof it and then submit it....I really liked the storyline, it was very hot and very sexy...and that's what we're all really here for - to get turned on....

don87654don87654over 19 years ago
Anyone can fuck their spouse.....

A complete waste of time. I look to this site for fantasy stories about fucking someone other than your spouse.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Very Erotic

And nice closing twist - others may express their displeasure at a married couple trying to stay together - as accidently as this seemed to be - but after the resterant each knew and used it - again nice twist and not the sickness some wish to have in the name of erotisism - puzzling isn't it!

More please - well written and delivered

Regards

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