All Comments on 'Married to a Monster Ch. 01'

Your little mystery is going very well. Am enjoying it, and interested to see where you take it. Greed, lust, murder! What more could one want.

I liked "Sandman" and also the way this started. Thanks for the entertainment.

A bit violent but interesting. Helen sounds fairly

cold.

With a real man is great, thanks I'll keep reading.

This, at times, was a bit choppy, but I really enjoyed it. A bit of expansion of certain themes and this story would be smooth as silk. Well done!