All Comments on 'Mass Effect Anguish Ch. 01'

Miranda and Jack please!

I found it to be lacking in cleverness and even for fiction the cardboard characters were so unlikeable that when I got to the end of the story, I just didn't care who was doing what to whom.

Just to be clear. This is a separate genre of smut from my other story. Connor's story is a light hearted one whereas this is a complete bastardization of the mass effect story line. These stories are meant to be quick, dirty trips with characters people already know. Don't come to these for the plot (In hindsight I should probably put that in before the story begins), Come to these if you're a fan of Mass effect and want to see some messed up stuff.

jack should rape Miranda for revenge

I'd definitely love to see more of Shepard and Seran!

I really enjoy the corruption theme and would love to see how the characters are transforming into Sharen's acolytes.

This was definitely enjoyable to read. I think Shepard should help Saren indoctrinate Ashley and Liara on the Presidium with Saren. That would be amazing.

Definitely would love to see more of Shepard and Saren.

miranda used by cerberus

tali being raped!!!! pleeeeeease!!!!!!!

Femshep being forced to capture Miranda for saren or even femshep and/or Liara Leung given to reaper creatures from ME3, varren, the thorian, hanar or all the above would be my vote - ideally less indoctrinated and trying to fight back (failing obviously)

Tali being raped Please PLEASE PLEASE

I'm thinking that female members of the Normandy crew raped by husks.

https://thumbs.gfycat.com/EnlightenedPersonalAmericanbittern-size_restricted.gif

In case you need some inspiration

I would love to see more of fem shepard being raped and dominated

Jack and cerberus or Miranda and father

Definitely more of fem shep and saren