All Comments on 'Massage Mat Ch. 05'

I like where this is heading -- can't wait for Chapter 6!!!

I hope this goes where I think and hope it's going. Love your writing. I just added you as a favourite author. Thanks for putting your thoughts into words and this great forum.

So many things I could gush about with this installment, but let me just go with, "More please!"

Really enjoying the ride so far. I like where the story seems to be going and all the interesting possible plot twists which could be on the horizon. The interplay between characters is great and the dialogue is particularly well done. Great job!

in the beginning they said leah's eyes are grey, then when she was with her father they said her eyes were green

Your ability to tell stories is so smooth that it caresses the imagination like feathery down. It's wonderful.

You do have a flair for what You are writing about. Makes Me wonder.

This is a great story. Everything I look for in an incestuous love story is here. With the exception of unscientific statements about incestuous couples having children, this story reflects now a real-life incestuous couple would behave/live. With absolute emotional and sexual honesty, openness, and trust, an incestuous bound can only strengthen and grow.