All Comments on 'Master of Fire'

It is nice to see a non-con story that isn't one where the female secretly loves it. Though I have a feeling, like every story on Literotica, this will turn into just that and probably even into some silly happily ever after love story.

The story thus far is good, though you do need to work a bit on plot and character development.

Outstanding work, keep it up.

Keep going.

That was awesome! Pleeeeeeese continue!

It's nice to see actual forced sex rather than the usual "she was secretly loving it" stories here. Please continue.

Please do not keep us waiting....write more.

This was without a doubt, delicious! Do keep writing!

Please keep them coming !!