All Comments on 'Master's New Slave'

by SteveIsaac

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ham_sandwichham_sandwichover 9 years ago
Excellent imagery!

Well imagined and well written. Five stars!

mel_pomenemel_pomeneover 9 years ago
Well done!

A fine first submission -- thank you, SteveIsaac, and welcome to Literotica. You write very well and I would love to read more of your work. Five stars.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
More please!

Well done, loved it. Great to see dominance without abuse. Don't get me wrong, sometimes punishment is recuired but pain is not the only way to dominate. Hope to see more of this story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
I wan't my first time

Every woman's dream master. Amazing writing!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

Well written. Well edited?

I enjoyed it a lot. Nice non-harsh doming.

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