All Comments on 'Master's Pet Ch. 01'

loved chapter one i cant help but wonder about the poor husband though, I'm hoping he's an unbearable ass.lol, thanxs for the great read, i'll be back to read more. Millisande

This was great fun. A good read and lots of stuff to think about. Nice segues into scenes. Peaks, edgy bits and emotions. Some nicely handled mushy stuff too. I liked it.

Dunno about the reference to the Story of O. I am yet to meet an experienced sub that actually liked it. (Not to say there aren't any out there lol) And the movie was atrocious. Kind of casts a shadow over the motives of the sub in the story. And when few motives are actually covered, it starts feeling like a vignette. Bloody good vignette though. Maybe we can get to know them a bit more as the chapters roll out. Also would have liked to have known her name. But that might have been on purpose.

Overall, as I said this was great fun, and like the other reader, I'll be back for more to see where things go.

:-D

SN

I really enjoyed this. It was too the point, which I found appealing. My favorite parts would have to have been the collars/ring. Each one had a purpose and symbolized something in their relationship. It seems like a lot of thought went into this chapter, allowing the reader to establish the commitment both characters were making. Thank you ~ Red