All Comments on 'Maternal Secrets'

A nice build up. Needs some further work and polishing to make it a better / wetter read. A more detailed sex scene would improve it too.

An enjoyable read nonetheless.

While I don't think it will make "Reader's Digest," die to a few grammatical errors, and the start/stop way it flowed. This story isn't half bad. The subject matter is on point, but the characters could use a little bit of work. Overall though, I liked the read. It was quick, to the point, and very sexy. I hope to read more of your thoughts and fantaasies soon.

I enjoyed the story!! It had the desired effect on me, as I was hard as I read on!!.

Would love to read.more of your work!

Decent but switches between Cooper and Spenser randomly which makes it confusing as to who is talking.