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Calit69Calit69almost 14 years ago
Mmm

Maybe your first story was more coherent. This story could have done with some editing . It gets somewhat confusing at times. Short and sweet but further chapters will require some concentration.

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In 1971, I seemingly appeared out of nowhere, and landed, quite naked, in a sticky heap in Bulawayo. I was apparently very distraught for a few months, and reportedly got over it. I have no memory of any of that, nor anything that led up to it thankfully! It sounds like quite ...

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