All Comments on 'Maya's Match'

I need a HEA for them. Please?

Definitely need more btwn these too. Well written

This really was a wonderful story! A few spelling errors here and there, but the grammar was fine and the pacing of the story was great! I like the set up (not too long, which i appreciate) and the descriptions were well written, too. Not much dialogue, but that suited the story fine. I'd love to see a sequel or continuation, but this story is just the perfect mouthful of fun already. Thanks for sharing it!

That was depressing and should have been listed under rape

I would read a second chapter to this, it's really good!

Hope that you will write more about Maya.... Lox seems to be an interesting character.

There were some typos but overall the English was far better than most I read on here. In fact, I find it funny when people bash people for typos or the occasional grammatical error. It's a free story that no one forced you to read. If you don't like it just stop reading. Anyway, thank you for the story it was a good read.

The title says it all. Keep writing but get an editor to clean up your english.