All Comments on 'Me And My Adopted Sister Ch. 02'

You can go on for quite a while before anyone needs to know.

Some will figure it out , but not for sure until she is prego

and shows

good story,

you need to read it before you submit it though

cum you wrote cun

and she licked her clit not he

CONTENT IS WHAT REALLY COUNTS! I think you tell a beautiful and exciting tale. Tell those who would criticize minor grammatical errors and spelling, to go do it to themselves. I think Jessy19 may be the best on this site and she would tell you about yourself, if you started such criticisms with her. You just keep telling your tales. You're already very good at what you do and will only improve. Thanks for a good story and please tell us the rest of it, if there is more.

DIALOG WAS A LITTLE MECHANICAL AND MORE PORNO THEN LOVING. WASN'T SHE A VIRGIN, AND WHAT HAPPENED TO TAKING HER HYMEN. DIDN'T FEEL THE LOVE, JUST LUST AND NOT MUCH OF THAT EITHER.

MAKE YOUR READER FEEL THEIR NEED AND LOVE. WITH SOME MORE EFFORT YOU COULD BE A BETTER WRITER. JUST SUGGESTIONS, TAKE THEM OR LEAVE THEM.