All Comments on 'Me, Rani, Ali & Arifa'

by hunter-dude

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
loved it, but narration is not good....

Good story, good ideas, but without continuity n harmony, if you could correct this, you could be a good author.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
more chapters

like to read more about this. mayb have both guys take each woman together.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Great story and had my attention until I reached the end.

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