All Comments on 'Me, Sis Plus Auntie Equals Bliss'

I kept fantasizing all night about Asia's 'navel duties' and my mind - and other parts of my body - wandered here and there and everywhere until a little voice told me it was just a small typo and to grow up at last. What a let-down.

But seriously: Have somebody check your story and correct typos and other blunders before submitting it. It will definitely improve your ratings.

Oh, did I tell you I liked the story? No? - Well, I liked the story!

Your story had brilliant expressions of emotion and clear depictions of the sexual situations. I can easily overlook the need for spell and grammar check.

Hands down, one of the best I've read, EVER. Thank you for not making Darwin a cowardly lame dude who just so happened to fall into a sexual situation with his sister...but just a shy reserved stand up guy who isn't afraid to be a REAL man and show real love. I truly appreciated this story! It was well written, had great character development, and answered all my questions. The ending *WAS* a little predictable--as soon as I saw that he woke up to a crappy birthday morning, I knew Jen was plotting on having Asia come back for his bday, which was AN AWESOME IDEA--but not so predictable that I didn't want to read it through to the end.

Thank you so much for this story!

Really good, well written