All Comments on 'Medusa'

I enjoyed reading your story. Thank you for sharing.

Why the repost of an outline? The plot is different storyline high potential, but this is the same as before, a bare bones outline.

You glossed over their budding relationship and got right into the meat of it. If this was a story between two humans fine. But its not.

Why is the scoring low and comments nonexistent?

I rest my case.