by juicyj19
I loved reading this story, it is fantastic. Please continue to write this story as I can't wait to read what happens next. Hopefully a happy ending.
I like how it is at the moment. Please Dont tell me this is where the trouble starts
Brilliant continuation, I adore the characters and how they are falling into their roles as girlfriends perfectly at a realistic pace. I dont think I need to say that I would like to read more as soon as possible ;)
I love this story. But I feel that you might be rushing it out to us just a bit. I feel that this installment needed just a bit more work to make it flow. The beauty of the love story began to get lost in the somewhat rushed feel of the gramatical construction... Just listen to me, I sound like Sister Mary Catherine from the fourth grade!!!!