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All Comments on 'Meeting The New Boss Ch. 01'
by Spartans1217
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AnthonyT60185about 9 years agoThe story had promise.
The plot was good but it was in need of a proof read. Presents should have been presence. Their is not the same as they're. Know and now are different meanings. Commas need to be used to show a break between two thoughts in a combined sentence. Find someone to edit.
davwooabout 6 years agoUninteresting
Sometimes there is nothing to say Just boring crap no story at sll
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