by Alex De Kok
first time.
I loved the build, the tension, and the exploration.
Get over yourself about the bra sizes, for fucks sakes, its a fictitious story, do you go on and on about the ones that have men with a 14 inch dick? I seriously doubt that.
As for the one saying this isn't a romance, it is, just because it included first time experiences doesn't make it any less of a romance.
I enjoyed this story.
This is just a nitpick, but 36B does not equal large breasts *or* a narrow rib cage. 34B-C is average. 34C is the exact same cup volume as 36B, but with a smaller band (the number is the band size, so a bigger number means a broader rib cage). The letter is all about the ratio of the breasts to the band size. So 34C is average; 34D is fairly large, but not unusually so; 34DD is definitely large, but still proportionate depending on hips, etc. As an exceptionally curvy woman, who understands how bra sizes work, this kind of error is sort of a pet-peeve of mine. I think it's better just not to mention the exact bra size at all, but if you're going to do so, do a google search first. However, I assume you're a guy, and a lot of women don't even know their proper bra size, so I don't really blame you.
Regarding the previous comment about Category - when 'Meg' was submitted back in 2000, there was NO 'first time' category. Nuff said? I have no plans to move it after all this time.
Alex
I know it's been long but it shoul be in the First Time
wasn't a romance at all,
this story, though short, still had a good build up, let the relationship build to a natural climax (did I say "climax?"), and prepared the couple for a continuing relationship (and maybe we readers for more peeking into their couplings). Keep up the good work, and thanks!
Hello from a reader,
I am thoroughly pleased and want to thank you for relating almost a primer for young inexperienced lovers.
I could almost insert myself in the young mans place in this story, when i
first discovered the wonders of mutual loving.
Please keep up the good work.
Franklin 26
Alex' stories are always worth reading, and this one more so than most. Builds beautifully, the writing is vivid and descriptive. Bravo!!
A first time romance story that hit the top of my favorite list in a hurry! I loved the slow buildup, and the author did an excellent job of describing the development of their relationship, a detail that's so often omitted.
This story was so romantic. Not to mention totally fucking hot