All Comments on 'Melanie - Again'

That was truly scrumpchis and great i hope you write more chapters and the mom looked great .

Pat

Atlanta,Ga

Just wanted you to know, it's one of the best draings on Literotica. Both beautiful and highly erotic, makes me look at her face and body and desire her. Good job! (and don't pay attention to the losers who slam it, they're idiots)

I was getting so involved in the story and hope the mom gets laid too, and the story continues..wow thanks

OMG i am no hairy hander myself but dude a friend refered me to this i touched ME more than my honey hasbro GFW make more

Perhaps the ultimate complement - but I thought this story was written by a woman - who write 95% of the erotica that I enjoy). Nice attention to detail and feelings on the first date and he tribulations of trying to have sex when your mother is in the house. Also the story held some very nice tensions - Where did Adam and her Aunt go? Will her mother blow Tim out of the house? Will Tim make an arse of himself with her mother? Yup erotica that engages the brain too. Look forward to reading your other stuff later. I enjoyed your picture too (and hope you enjoyed your hiking trip). Ripple

If there is one thing missing from most stories on literotica it is agency within female characters - most of the time they are just empty shells that males enact their fantasies upon. While this story does appeal to some of the larger ideals of male sexuality (the animalistic side of him for example), it does it in such a way as to represent the female view of the situation.

Thank you for writing this - it is a pleasure to read something truly erotic rather than, shall I say, smut intended solely to entertain empty penises?

ONE picture? Was that REALLY an illistrated story? What a waste of time

I can tell you that I would have fucked Tim well before the end. My juices were runnimg and fingers going fast as hell.

More please.

Marie

i was blown away by your illustaration. you have mad skills: you should do more! I haven't even read the story yet, but now i'll go back and do that.

omg this story was one of the best that i read so far it had me going to the part i got horny!!

It was a good story with the right mix of the story line and sex