All Comments on 'Melanthe'

I'm glad you're back!

Excellent beginning can't wait to see what you've got in mind for Melanthe

I love this story! Hope that you're planning a follow up, because it's too good to stop there!!

so different then the other stories. Keep on writing.

Loved the story. Hope there is a chapter 2.

Loved that it was different than most of the stories and how you wrote it.

I hope there is more of this story to come

get a damned editor. Nothing ruins a story faster than having to reread a paragraph 2 or 3 times just to try to figure out what you wrote.

Really love your stories! This was a great one, AND VERY WELL WRITTEN!!!

Keep them coming, please!

Different take on vampire. Lovely, well written

Dark and passionate and entrancing. I hope you do continue this story. Your writing in this genre is superb.

YESSS! You're back. This story is simply wonderful I can only imagine what you have in store for Melanthe I hope there is a chapter 2 ; )

I hope you keep writing the continuation to this story... It is great... what will happen next? Is she bound to him the old ways? Please continue!!!

I loved it! Please continue story.

Welcome back! :)

Well done. I haven't read a story so hot, in a long while. I can't wait for the next update!

I love the building tension between Aran and Mel. Can't wait to see more!

I love your stories and this one promises to be great! Please continue and welcome back,

welcome back, you're still my favourite around here :)

Such a great start to an amazing story! Loved this new take on vampires! Looking forward to the next chapter - just hope it comes soon!!!

Really enjoyed this, hope you will continue the story

i love your stories can't wait for the next chapter!

It's been awhile since I've read your work. I'm glad I thought to look you up! I hope to see another chapter to Melanthe.

More please! Great start!

I absolutely loved this story. There are so many things you could do with it, and, like your other fans, I love the twist on vampire. I saw you modified your account recently, hopefully that means more to this story is in the works. You're writing is amazing and very hot. As for the earlier comment about editing, I actually didn't have a problem reading this story and I'm generally considered a grammar nazi. It could use a little reviewing and editing, of course, but it doesn't have to be perfect. Its close enough as it is. :D

So.. I'm pretty much in love with this story! So please!!! CONTINUE SOON!! :) I can't wait for more!

I soo wish you had not stopped with this story, I love your writing

Great story! Can't wait for the nexr chapter!

This is so amazing please turn into series, It has so much potential

That's really all I can say. Please let there be another.

I hope you post more of this couple......If you wrote books, I would definitely buy them. Do you?....if so could you give me your pen name?

Please wright more this story is so captivating. I dont want it to end.

please more

I can't stop wondering what happens next!

Please continue to write this as a series . Very good.

Please continue to write, I have read your stories often and I would love it if you continued with this one. Please please please pleeeeeaaaaasssseeee :)

such a great story . Cant wait for more .

May i make a suggestion that you concentrate

On one story at a time ? That way you dont

Spread yourself thin . Finish one story ( i vote

For Melanthe) then move on to another .

Thanks much for writing again . Cant wait for more

Of yr great work .

That was a delicious beginning. Your phrasing is so powerful. This story has good direction, don't let it lie. More please!

Wow. Please write more!

More please!

Wow!!!! That was truly rich. I have strayed back to this story several times

without commenting or rating. Its' intensity beckons me.

Please by all means expand on this when you get some time.

you have to continue please!!!! this story is irresistible

Please please continue it!

Melanthe has the making of a really good read. You can do so much with it. The setting is unusual enough to draw readers in and keep them interested.

Please continue this story to conclusion, even if you dont finish any of the other stories ... although I would like you to finish The Novice, Bree and Chastity.

Such a great idea. Could have been a wonderful series. I really do hope you retun to this storyline at some point.

I always love your stories, I just wish you would continue the good ones. I would certainly enjoy seeing more to this story.

So many of your stories are worthy of additional chapters. What can I say there are many worse addictions than reading. I hope there is more to this story soon.

to what could be a fantastic ongoing storyline. Please consider continuing.

Intense! :)

Fantastic! Would love to read more of Melanthe and Aran

I have re-read this multiple times and I am wondering whether you have any plans to expand on the story? I personally would love to know more about the world and characters you have created. Such a fascinating story!

Well it was a great first chapter,although is seems there should be more to it,,,,,,and since it was over 3 years since it was posted,,,it good to say that this will be it and leave us hanging and wanting more,,,,such a waste of readers and writers time,,,,another one to the graveyard of unfinished stories...

I like this, I want more, please.

Damn, this is HOT! Where is the next chapter?

Loved it!!

Write more plz..

Well-paced, hot, and kept my interest throughout. Glad there are more chapters!