by G.G. Chandler
a very good first effort. He wasn't too bright criticising her tits anyway, considering everything else pleased him. As they were not married he could walk away anytime if he didn't like the "punishment". Thanks for sharing.
Men are dumb sometimes and don't know when to keep their mouths shut.
Boyd
That was a great portrayal of a strong and sensual woman. Well done.
Ok...so I have a small dick...and gals have always commented on that... but it is how you use it... you don't fuck with tits..... they are accessories... just like my tits.
Melinda was too sensitive and her revenge too brutal... I would have walked out as soon as she brought in the boy...
If this fool was not so stupid he would realize that his girlfriend had a 19 year old boy (at 30 he will be a man right?) on tap and ready to perform at no notice. The chances are poor that this is the first time she has had sex with another male while she is with the current wimp (I meant boyfriend). Just happened to find a boy with a monster cock, by choosing a boy like this out of her stable of fucking partners to show her boyfriend that he is insignificant compared to a boy who will accept her personality and tits. I hope he does not think that she would be faithful to him in marriage or in a relationship.
Writer - why a wimp kick off - not erotic even if it had been an elephants cock - you stated that he was ready for a lifetime of watching while the whore fucked any cock she wanted or he could hit the road. No respect or reality - just the worst kind of watching suck & fuck!
Why didn't you - hit the road - sicker this way huh - well is this how it is to be cuckster??? The few sicko's loved your humiliation - her tormenting the wimp and he liked jacking off to the larger hemungus cock!!! Gay?
Sad start cuckster as it appears you love the deviant subhuman sickness of crude absurdities without any of life's consequence - just non-erotic base crap of a fetish type for the jaded sick one's - get some help little sick one!
The writer sucks cocks, either written by a woman or a fag. No man would let his future woman do this. He would have walked out of the closet, spit in her face and told her he hoped she just contracted a terminal case of aids and walked off. He may have possibly let he know what a piece of shit slut she was also.
Ignore the weird, negative comments. How unfortunate they were posted. Compared to many stories here, this is a great one. I thoroughly enjoyed it. I dig the woman, and the strong characterizations, and their conflict, and how it was resolved. GREAT work.
You took an almost cliche storyline and added something at least somewhat novel to it. I liked it.