All Comments on 'Melissa Gets Takeout.'

and use your own bullets, would waste mine on you

Interracail cuckold sucks Don't quit your day job. Written by a 10 year old. Guess what? This is not erotic in any way 1*

I thought the dialogue was terrific. Very realistic, not over the top.

The first part of the story really could have been condensed more, though.

For all you anons, if you don't like it, skip on to the next story. No need to spread your hate, especially with your substandard reading comprehension.

You pompous twit. I take it PolyLvr is not your real name. Correct? So you are no less anonymous than anybody else on this site.I love you people who log in with an anonymous moniker and deem their opinion of more value than theirs. The height of idiocyWouldnt you say/By the way. Who died and appointed you the guardian of all Literotica comments. They are opinions you moron and wheher you like it or not and whether they are Anonymous or not. People are entitled to them. Just as you are. Stop with the anon crap though.BTW I did not think much of this story. Been done a thousand times before and was not very well written

in a pathetic story. No tension, no believability, no character development - just a load of over-used cliches thrown together and presented as erotica. It isn't the tiniest bit erotic. It's boring and banal.

Author should take a long walk on a short pier.

Substandard? You pompous ass. Your kind would be the defenders of trash. What makes it worse you can't keep that scum mouth of yours shut. Something makes you lash out at other readers with opposing opinions. That means you're lacking something, namely a brain. Now next time you feel like voicing a negative opinion why don't you take your own advice and move on.

Nothing new here...

I really try to let others have their own opinion, but this one as a little too off the mark to let go.

Did you miss the part where he was routinely cheating on her? That is NOT a WACC set up. What, it was okay for him to fuck around but not her? If a story is cliched, so was your comment.

You would get a better score in the right category

Wrong category and trite, cliched plot.

Keeping track of who she dated first, who she gave it up to first, and who she dated longer, and how long each of those were was a mess ... it looked, for a while, like she might actually be 40 years old (or gave up her cherry at age 7 - in violation of LIT standards!). That kinda cleared up later (kinda - actually, it became evident that working through that puzzle was silly for THIS story!) The plot never thickened, and the dialogue was trite!

I can tolerate that some hubbies accept their sweeties having a tryst with another guy ... BUT if it is a whim for a guy she has only seen across the room, then her lack of respect for herself and for me become a real concern in continuing the relationship ... regardless of any overt sexual contact!

2*