All Comments on 'Melody and Kaiden Ch. 02'

WHATS UP WITH THESE IM SO TRIED OF THESE SHORT ASS CHAPTERS . DID U GETG U A NEW LAPTOP YET? IF SO HAVE U DONE ALL UR HOMEWORK? OFF WORK? THE REASON IM ASKINTG IS I NEED MORE KAIDEN N MEL LIKE NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!?

The story obvi requires some editing and the pace is much too fast but I really like your music selections...

Kadien is a real fuck up. He is more like his father than he thinks. I do wish Mel thought more of what Kadien said and figured that his opinion was low when it comes to women. I wonder what the next chapter is going to be like cause most times there's no trying to change a Jackasses mind.

And I don't mind yu not having an editior. I just want longer chapters

Wow is all I had to say about this installment. Poor Melody, hopefully we see more of her personality come out in her for the future chapters, I know she has to be one tough feisty cookie underneath it all from all the crap she been through. As for Kaiden…yikes….that was just cruel! He needs to get a taste of his own medicine, he is every bit of an ass he claims his dad is hopefully Melody won't forgive him right away from making her feel like a whore basically and I wonder how the dynamics will change now that she knows he is a movie star

That would only be fare.. Evil revenge to belittle the cu$&!

OMG, I feel so werid cause your story totally made me cry when he was a jerk and treated her like a whore. I really like her though, she seems adroable :) You're a very talented write also, keep up the good work! Oh and PLEASE update soon.

This almost made me cry but its great so far, thier is their

Thanks for the positive commentary. I especially like anon's comment. It seriously made me laugh, I think my roomate's think i'm crazy. I'm working on a chapter that focuses more on him xx

Thanks lovelies, keep reading!

I cant wait to read what happens next :)

so is there any hope here or is this story orphaned :( . I hope not.

UPDATE!!!!!

So what if it's like LCA? Please finish! It's great so far!

please please finish this please I know she is gonna be prego

Need more. can't leave us in suspense.

Okay, I know we all have personal lives and what not,I get it. But why start a story and not finish? Such a great story at that.. This says it was made late 2011, it's almost wake 2014 no finish to this seems likely...

Please finish, this is so good

You're seriously giving up on this story? Who gives a figgety FUCK about comparing it to another story! This is yours, and you have opportunity to make it different, so do that! You CAN'T let this go! At first, I wasn't going to read it because you said you were giving up on it, but you can't DO this to me! WTF???