All Comments on 'Memento'

by rachelg

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asiaprofasiaprofabout 17 years ago
A wonderful first submission!

Being torn in opposite directions

By diamterical desires

And the mixed emotions

Are brought out so well.

eightballbumeightballbumover 17 years ago
Loved it

I loved the frustration your character goes through. Dealing with guilt and humility.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Mmmm, keep going....

Very good writing, and I would like to see what develops next.

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