All Comments on 'Memoirs Ch. 01'

Your story has potential however there are mistakes in English perhaps due to the fact that English is not your native language...that is fine....You might want to have someone check out the story and correct it if possible...

I will wait for the next chapter...

Minimal character or actual story development. The action in the story consisted of man making love to his wife ....ho hum .

Story has possibilities depending where you take it.

But, re-read your drafts and edit!

I did not find this story supposedly in the incest category very stimulating. Please proof read and find an editor.

Only because zero is not an option.

You guys are so nice to this writer who obviously has difficulty communicating in the English lanuage. What value is there in something so uninteresting and poorly written? (By the way, I'm not a negative person. There is much that I like on this site.)