All Comments on 'Menace of the Red Planet Ch. 06'

I'm happy that the sheba story comes next, it sounds more interesting :-)

I expect that you have done your period piece pastiche research in Rider, Rudyard and Roemer, a lot of their is available on Gutenberg :-)

I hope I'm not disappointing you with feedback that may sound like litcrit and not clitlick :-)

this is a great story. Facinating and a lot of action. i enjoyed reading all of this and hope to read more what happens next. This is really aewsome!.

-LW