All Comments on 'Mentor Ch. 01'

Good word pictures and dialogue. An engaging story, we will look forward to many more.

Many thanks.

well you on your way to that first book if this story is any thing to go by

so hey thank you for being such a real good writer. and making this story both intresting and exciting and horny to.

This... has to be one the greatest stories I've ever read- however short. You're a fantastic writer and I sincerely hope you're working towards your own book if the idea interests you, cause darling, you've got the talent. I'd pay 20 bucks for any book you've written!

Keep on writing my friend!

I liked your story and it was well written, I am glad I followed your link from the feedback forum.

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Otherwise very well-written, believable.