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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Very long, and not much to get excited about

Spectre17Spectre17over 9 years ago
Keep Going

Well done, love to read more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Outstanding.

Very well written and interesting. Thanks for your hard work

jmkuehnjmkuehnover 9 years ago
Very well done!

I liked the storyline and there is a lot more that can be done with this. I would love to see how things go after she has to spend his tour in her gadget. Still very nicely done.

jhollanderjhollanderover 9 years ago

Erotic, raw, and incredibly expressive. Loved the ending.

flink_og_rar_mandflink_og_rar_mandover 5 years ago
Blågårds Plads

"Blågårds Plads" not "Blagardslads"

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Bl%C3%A5g%C3%A5rds_Plads

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I'm a Portland, Oregon-based, frequently touring songwriter/musician. I also write essays, do podcasting, and occasionally write erotica. You can find me on FetLife as Choto.