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- COMMENTS
Rimmerdal5 months agoDamn that was so disjointed and full of errors it was tough to wade through.
Made very little sense at all.
Ruttweiler6 months agoThe characters weren’t believable, so no point in going on.
oksideshow8594196 months agoYou are correct on your ending
The way you ended the story could go multiple ways you left at a doozey of a cliffhanger
(tick stock tick tock no time to dilly dally Mr. Saxton_Hart)
Anonymous6 months agoExcellent story. From the comments, I think a lot of people don't know what a 1% patch implies. And I didn't mind the ending at all, I rather expected it.
Kaeyo6 months agoA really good story until those last two paragraphs, then it really tanked. A very disappointing turn of events and ruined the entire thing fir me.
JBird116 months agoGood until the ending Derrick deserved it but I a!ways felt make her love with what she has done is a greater punishment
numbnutz496 months agoWhat a cop-out! Story was pretty decent although I hate the repetition of points over and over again. But the ending? WTF was that!
Anonymous7 months agoWhoever is your editor needs to start making paper flowers or gluing macaroni onto oatmeal boxes because they suck as an editor. I stopped reading when every other sentence was a simple, declarative sentence beginning with 'I'. That style not only puts the 'bush' in 'bush league', but it sets up a rhyme inside the reader's mind, which annoys, bores, and ruins a decent story. Didn't read; didn't rate.
Dumbguy698 months agoWhy would anyone try so hard to keep a cheating spouse. It makes no sense. Then no ending. 2 stars.
