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Rimmerdal4 months agoDamn that was so disjointed and full of errors it was tough to wade through.
Made very little sense at all.
Ruttweiler5 months agoIt was a slog to get through
The characters weren’t believable, so no point in going on.
oksideshow8594195 months agoYou are correct on your ending
The way you ended the story could go multiple ways you left at a doozey of a cliffhanger
(tick stock tick tock no time to dilly dally Mr. Saxton_Hart)
