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- COMMENTS
Rimmerdal4 months agoDamn that was so disjointed and full of errors it was tough to wade through.
Made very little sense at all.
Ruttweiler5 months agoThe characters weren’t believable, so no point in going on.
oksideshow8594195 months agoYou are correct on your ending
The way you ended the story could go multiple ways you left at a doozey of a cliffhanger
(tick stock tick tock no time to dilly dally Mr. Saxton_Hart)
Anonymous5 months agoExcellent story. From the comments, I think a lot of people don't know what a 1% patch implies. And I didn't mind the ending at all, I rather expected it.
Kaeyo5 months agoA really good story until those last two paragraphs, then it really tanked. A very disappointing turn of events and ruined the entire thing fir me.
