All Comments on 'Message from Becky Ch. 01'

very nice start Charlotte. I am very interested in the following parts.

Hi charlotte.

An interesting start, plenty of character developement and detail, rather than a simple wham bang thank you story.

I will read the second part now

Miranda

Charlotte, I really enjoyed your story. It's sweet and well written. My own personal taste is for a longer buildup.

Excellent intro and lead in to chapter 2. Original theme, believable characters, topped with good story flow! :)

A very sensual stories with great detail and scene setting. Definitely got the panties of this teacher soaked *wink*.

Was an original idea for a way to get this relationship started!...and the way this first part ends had me quivering with delicious anticipation!

you told me about your stories and this is the first I've read - i love it. So sweet and gentle.

Love the very natural way the story unfolds. Really enjoyed reading it.

Very nice, sweet and romantic, and now I want to read more.....mmmm

Very seductive, I was getting so aroused when it ended, I am hoping part two will help take me over the edge 5*

You had me at "Truth or Dare." :) I love the gentleness of the encounter, and the natural awkwardness in front of the camera that gradually turned into something mire. I also liked Julie being scared of thunder and jumping into bed - it made the whole thing almost wholesome.

Good buildup!