by Charlotte35f
You had me at "Truth or Dare." :) I love the gentleness of the encounter, and the natural awkwardness in front of the camera that gradually turned into something mire. I also liked Julie being scared of thunder and jumping into bed - it made the whole thing almost wholesome.
Very seductive, I was getting so aroused when it ended, I am hoping part two will help take me over the edge 5*
you told me about your stories and this is the first I've read - i love it. So sweet and gentle.
Was an original idea for a way to get this relationship started!...and the way this first part ends had me quivering with delicious anticipation!
A very sensual stories with great detail and scene setting. Definitely got the panties of this teacher soaked *wink*.
Excellent intro and lead in to chapter 2. Original theme, believable characters, topped with good story flow! :)
Charlotte, I really enjoyed your story. It's sweet and well written. My own personal taste is for a longer buildup.
Hi charlotte.
An interesting start, plenty of character developement and detail, rather than a simple wham bang thank you story.
I will read the second part now
Miranda
very nice start Charlotte. I am very interested in the following parts.