All Comments on 'Metro Magic'

Loved the twist at the end.

Never saw it coming.

Shucks, I thought the ring thing was really going to work! Also a nice twist at the end. Thanks,

Jack

When you go read it again, you'll see some hints I planted about the twist. Things I *didn't* say count too. Now you know I planned to miss my stop to give the wife time to get home. I built up the ring backstory and added some tech to make it believable. I even included a sketch that didn't get posted.