by barnabus
so far this is one of the most morally satisfying stories yet. thank you for being such a good person in the way you wrote this it gave me new hoope that people can actually be gentle whilst fucking
Thanks for your comments. Love CAN be gentle and 'loving' regardless of what some writers say. There is a reason why it is called 'love' making.
Barnabus
Excellent story. I like the gentle build-up of the plot. You have the makings of a well published writer! Keep it up.
However, even a good thing can be taken too far. The IDEA behind MC is to take control. Just do it gently. But DO take control. The key word is: TAKE.