All Comments on 'Michael's Dream Ch. 02'

Good job! I enjoyed the read! It was very believable.

Thanks for writing!

sexmate

Everything was great until you reached the part that they actually fuck. Then you hurry though it as if you had a dead line to submit it. I think that if you spent as much energy in the fucking part as you didin the oral sex the story would have been a 5 instead of a 3

started well built up then blah

This got me so horny. Keep on going, althought like someone else said, the build up is fantastic but it was over real quick. I'd love to see this build up to anal sex

I got sick