All Comments on 'Microfiction'

Interesting attempt at bite-sized pieces of a sex scene. I didn't find it all that effective, and I specifically didn't like the first one. Too obviously a male author trying (and failing) to look into the mind of a female character.

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But, as I said, an interesting attempt.

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Lue

It’s like watching a sketch artist draw a complete image with a handful of lines. Well done. I look forward to your next collection

Different in a very good way. You selections were varied, yet an author's personality prevailed in each. Bravo.

Just the thing! Sometimes you just need a quickie. An orgasm, or hearing your lover orgasm. A stranger or the love of your life. A new feeling or a cherished feeling.

Written perfectly. 5 star all the way!

Lovely

And I thought doing 750 words was hard. Creating a thumbnail visual is essential for these sorts of mini-tales, and I liked this one the best 'I freeze as I walk past the window and she tosses away her bra.' Splendid.

Take your typical 3 page story and you'll find literally dozens of such snippets, a few sentences used to describe a moment. A verbal equivalent of a photo, or a screen capture of a film? Or a cartoon of some sort .. a single image with perhaps a line or two of dialog underneath.

Very nice!!! See, it does not take page after page to tell a story.

Five stars because I'd like to see Class Dismissed developed into a story.

Very well done. Wonderfully evocative prose.

Love this style of short but sweet. Leaving plenty to the imagination whilst describing just enough!

They were light, sexually stimulating and fun. Please keep writing more!

Tbey feel like the haiku of shoet stories! Lovely