All Comments on 'Miley & Me'

Poorly written and just... awful.

I can not believe that I wasted the time to make a comment except to say that you should not take up space to write any other stories.

Horrible, horrible, horrible. The IM conversation was probably the worst part. Please don't inflict this drivel upon us again.

You have a long way to go yet. This story, while I liked a few parts of it, was generally poorly written. I think perhaps with time you could improve tho, I like your... "Ideas" but your form needs a lot of work.

ideas were good but thats all you get points for, it was poorly written and had no flow, work on conventional writing before moving into erotica again please.

I personally though this story was quite good, it had a fabulous story line and yous wouldnt know a good story even if it hit you in the face.. I reason you have talent.. keep on writing :D