by book_man_03
I wish Ben's list had 99 women on it. I want to see you keep writing this story on and on and on and on and on ... Five stars all the way.
I usually like longer stories, but this one had so much minutiae that I lost interest. Another thing that got very old for me was Ben calling his mom SexyLady endlessly. It was cute in the beginning, but you beat that dead horse far too long. The cuteness long since wore off.
Please continue this hot series! I want to see Ben fuck his female cousin, Jenny, and Alice to boot! Even see him fuck all five lovely ladies in a group setting!
You write so well. Ireally enjoyed the read and felt like I was in the background of the story. I hope you will write more chapters - soon. Thank You!
``OK mom , I am coming in now" what the fuck ,, is the wimp fucking or parking A car in the fucking garage.. Ended the story for me, to bad it was A half decent story up to this crap
LLP
Congratulations. The middle chapters live up to the promises made in the first few. Great descriptions, vivid sex, The story continues to build as the words seem to fly off the page.
Chapter 2 was just as hot as chapter 1. You've got a great writing style. On to the next chapter!
I nearly gave you ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ The overuse of fucking Sexy Sarah's name was annoying to say the least and uncalled for, for Christ sake..
MILF 01 was great. MILF 02 has proven as good and better in many ways. Keep up the great writing. Looking forward to the next issue. You paint a great picture.
I have both parts one and two, both were awesome and well worth the 5 stars I gave them both.
I, too, could do without the "SexySarah" from here on as that was used for the chat series. Now that they have gotten intimate, simply having Ben refer to her as "Sarah" or "Mom" is Hot imo. Otherwise, I like the flow of events and look forward to further steamy, erotic incestuous AND non-incestuous sex for Ben, Tony, etal. 5* for the heat factor. -dave
ok, a bit late to the party, but Loving the series! I, too, am with some others... the SexySarah should have ended somewhere in the early part of MILF 02. Let hime reffer to her simply as Sarah.... Adds to the HOT factor. otherwise a great eros read... I still gave it a 5.
Loved the story and the erotic MILF photography shoot for Ben’s Fantasy MILF List!