All Comments on 'Milk Sow Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Just keeps...

..getting better and better. Very erotic and well written. Excellent as building the suspense.

PepperpuppyPepperpuppyabout 15 years ago
Ginny, you won't now what hit you

It only seems to get better after each installment. I want to find out how she feels after they start to milk her. One thing this latest chapter told us is that her breasts would get bigger and firmer with her time on the farm..... Bigger tits for her hubby's machine, hmmm ??????

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
maybe...

have ginny marked as a proper sow, brand her ass, pierce her nose with a ring, and tattoo each tit with numbers

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Oh...My...God...

The immediate shift in her status, once she signs the papers, blew me away. I know what it is to torture oneself, second-guessing the degradation one truly needs and desires, because one is fearful of change, particularly loss of others' respect and one's position in society. And so I CAME when I read the words "The SOW needs to get undressed."

Thank you, Sir, for this WONDERFUL D/s fantasy world.

This is the hottest story idea I've read in a long time, and you, Sir, know the mind of the submissive and write eloquently of it.

Andromeda7Andromeda7over 12 years ago

Well written, your story develops niceley; as I suppose will Ginnys udders.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Fantastic piece! One small suggestion:

In this section, perhaps add specific description of Ginny removing her wedding rings and dropping them into the storage box, along with her thoughts and emotions.

crazeeboy123crazeeboy123about 9 years ago
Voluptuous degradation

The coup -de-gras of this story is the anticipation followed by Ginny's realisation that she has lost control of her life & that she is to a great extent at the mercy of these people. Ben must be wondering what he has let Ginny in for

why_not_jillwhy_not_jillabout 7 years ago
Again well done

Still enjoying

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