All Comments on 'Millie Ch. 02'

I enjoyed this second chapter even more than the first.

As i said for chapter one , very drawn out and long winded but i enjoyed it so will look forward to next chapter

I really want to see him fuck his mother.

You totally fucked it up with the "bitch" shit.

I love your story. In Chapter 1, you wrote:

".... Everything I read always mentioned sexual intercourse as being incest. So was everything else NOT incest?...After doing a lot of research through every old Playboy magazine I could lay my hands on I decided that anything sexual except intercourse was fine, as a matter of fact it was only mostly considered foreplay. In fact the general consensus was that everything other than actual intercourse was foreplay! .."

Maybe, you find the solution to the dilemma. How about if they only perform foreplay ? (handjobs, blowjobs, titfucks, anal sex.... etc) It would be very, very exciting....

an insecure, shy, immature boy who can't even ask the object of his affection for a date suddenly becomes a demanding, cruel, dom? go back and reread part one yourself and try again.

story entirly to long.. to much deciption. and callling his mother a bitch it total out of hand. if she read the story i hope she back hands you

Stupid! Just stupid!

I need character development, both in depth and breadth and if it takes two chapters to develop this, so be it. I read mother/son incest stories for the chemistry, unconditional love, intimacy and honesty being nurtured between the couple. The emotional and positional growth of the characters is mentally pleasing. The growth of self-awareness and self-confidence between the two is beautiful. Who else would love someone as unconditionally and limitlessly that a mother and son. Finally, the sexual and emotional epiphany that is experienced between the lover. Another 5 star story.