All Comments on 'Milly Houston Pt. 01'

Egmont is a very clever writer and this story reflects that. But the number of small grammatical-spelling errors is amazingly high. It appears that Egmont may not even read the stories after he writes them.

Egmont, you need an editor.

Trogted

Keep the same pace in the other parts and it will be much more than just clever writing. It's refreshing and very pleasant reading. G.Belgium

G. BELGUIM. I'm glad to have pleased.

TROGTED: If you are so clever why not email me the irritants marked in Pt 01 as a clip and paste with markings in red. Email to egmontgrigor@clear.net.nz Bear in mind I use English grammar, not American grammar. Contrary to your statement I do re-read after writing and write with MS Word spellcheck switched on and set to American English. Much obliged.