All Comments on 'Mimi and Me'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Just so-so, in my opinion.

Not too bad, but it didn't really click. Repetition,length, made it seem a little dull. You didn't get too crude, but the whole thing seemed too much.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
kinky little gem

loved the dirty talk. Would welcome a sequel. Good work!

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