Much better, I was still pretty confused about some things, specifically the beginning of this chapter. Did not feel like it entirely meshed with what occurred in Chapter 4....but that maybe a good thing?
18 yrs... amazing. I will be posting a new series in the coming months.. For all those following me.. thank you. This series will NOT continue any of the work I have on this site or any other... sorry. Years ago I had much planned and saved to be posted continuing on Inkwe...