by LaLaLady
i love this story so please top it up and finsh it with a good thing going. i very good start though, well done
please dont wait too long to post the next submission. this was like a half-chapter and i need more Bryan and Mina!
I've been waiting for more from you. I can't wait to see what happens next in this story! Keep up the good work.
I didn't like it. It seemed like you just remembered you had a story to finish and that this was the best you could do last minute. It was too short, too corny, and wayyyy too predictable. You're better than this.
I know you didnt just leave us hangin like that. Glad to have you back cant wait to see if brian comes back.