All Comments on 'Minute Man'

It was really well written and funny as hell at the end. Thanks for sharing man. It could go with another chapter or so but that is up to you. Keep up the good work.

Don't stop now! Please give us more of these three.

Just finished 'Minute Man' - loved it. You need a further few chapters on the lives of these three. Keep up the great work, you are always a wonderful read.

It was a great read and I agree that if your able, another chapter or two would be appreciated. Thank You. Ronnie W.

Nice story, xcept you need to edit it better. Who is Bobby? When did Susan become Tammie? Very inconsistant.

Was it obtuse or acute?

The "long supple legs" of a woman "just over five feet."

The "long supple legs" of a woman "just over five feet."

The story was good, like-able, prob-able, and accept-able, but my oh my, you must have used a voice-to-text meachine, or a steno.

The Last word, " feinted " is what a boxer does with his left, as he is getting ready for a right. Feint is also the word for ruled lines on paper. Nothing to do with falling over

And of course it is riddled with "your" for "you're" and all the other bad word choices. At least there was no "loose his temper"

But no one will ever improve, so why do we bother.

but wait. the Best of all...."She may have had a face of an angle, but she had the body of the devil"

How many degrees in that angle ?

Yours,

Kilroy

gulping the hot jism, he took it in the cornhole, betrayed!

You stole much of this directly from your other stories. Specifically Jane's Folly.

and got bored w/ reading about a big dick being so necessary to great sex, BUT, the ending w/ both sluts preggers was pretty funny.

How much time did Michael get fot a Triple Homicide?

3 stars. Well, that was silly.