All Comments on 'Miranda and Jason'

it's a real shame you have been here for so long and yet still don't have brains enough to use a good editor before posting when will you learn SHOW SOME PRIDE IN YOUR WORK AND SOME RESPECT FOR THE READERS AND NEVER POST A STORY WITHOUT GOING THROUGH A GOOD EDITOR FIRST NOW GET AN EDITOR AND REWRITE ALL YOUR STORIES

You don't need to continue this story; I think it ended as perfectly as it could. The sex scene was really well done, and even though the plot of your story has been used before by many others, your treatment of it was much better than a lot of the ones I've read. I hope you keep writing.