by Domwoolf
The motivations of the dwarfs to keep Snow White displayed (as treasure/possession?) Could have been more fully realized. Again, I prefer more show than tell, but the ideas were good. Your sticking to the original story plotline was cool, but I question then if it's truly a horror story as we are all aware of what will happen next. To me, this is still a fantasy story, but I know categorizing work is often the hardest part!
Now that's the the way to tell it! Damn good story-and the sex wasn't bad either