Note: You can change font size, font face, and turn on dark mode by clicking the "A" icon tab in the Story Info Box.
You can temporarily switch back to a Classic Literotica® experience during our ongoing public Beta testing. Please consider leaving feedback on issues you experience or suggest improvements.
Click here'Well... Dan...' she breathed. I felt a post-orgasm tingle race through my body as my name was formed by those perfect lips in that perfect voice. 'That was... quite something.'
'Glad you tried it now?' I asked exhaustedly, unable to resist a quip.
She laughed, her voice husky from moaning, and wrapped her arms around me. A soft 'I...' rushed from her lips as she buried her face in my neck, and I strained my ears for more but heard only soft, regular breathing.
'Miss?' I asked tentatively, unsure what the proper honorific was for a teacher whose brains you'd just fucked out. No response. Miss Aphrodite was sleeping peacefully in my arms, a smile that I had put there still lighting her face. I exhaled slowly.
Fuck. I think I'm in love with you.
With that foolish, clichéd, reckless thought, my eyes drifted closed and I joined her in sleep. Tomorrow, we would have a lot of things to think about.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 3 years agoYou published this 7-1/2 years ago, stating that it was your first such and that if response was favorable, you had a couple of sequels in mind. I see they didn't materialize. I have not read the 17 other comments, but here is some praise for you.This was delightfully well-written, with proper punctuation, sentence structure, and spelling as well as subtle humor ("Fuckin' A!" he exclaimed. I wish I was.) Such skillful delivery is rare on Literotica.com and a welcome addition.
I'm sure you have your reasons for not following up--possibly having to do with writing for money, given your ability--but I will heartily welcome anything else you choose to send our way. Bravo!
Anonymousover 7 years agobut it has been three years without a follow-up so I'm guessin' the author won't see this comment. Shame, I would have enjoyed Chapter 2. I would have enjoyed a little more background on the heroine. Why exactly did this ravishing accomplished beauty pick some student, seemingly at random, as a lover. What kink don't we know about her?
Anonymousabout 10 years agoU r an exceptionally great writer,I am eagerly waiting 4 d sequel...d best story i read in literotica till date...terrific indeed!!keep up the great writing :)
illiterate3over 10 years agoMany stories (like sexual experiences) lack anticipation and patience, and rush to the main event. Graphic details are provided prematurely, thus being too graphic and too intense. Words are used repetitively, non-creatively, or are unsuccessfully strung together in an effort to sound eloquent, but instead turn into an unwelcome mental hike across the jagged and ill-fitting sentences. All of which are obviously a turn off and make the stories no longer worth one's time.
Your story is the polar opposite. It is incredibly and effortlessly articulate, descriptive, fluid, and arousing. Wow. You have a natural way with words, with timing, and with making the universal sexual acts that many of us are all too familiar with and intrinsically crave for, to sound brand new and utterly exciting. It would have been nice to know what the student looked like, yet not knowing lets us fill in the blanks.
I can't wait to see more of your work.
drteethoover 10 years agoFor a debut story, this was pretty spectacular. Bravo to you! I hope you do produce the sequels you promised if this is any indication as to how good those would be.
