by callida
Very well-written and talented. I can't wait for the next chapter. This chapter has such an intensity. One suggestion though, I'd like to know more of his feelings and mind. thank you
I really enjoyed this story so far. The characters are interesting and unique in a plotline that sometimes can be so drab.
Keep up the good work!
completely addicted, powerful & talented writing, this is by far one of the best stories, please continue!! thank you so much
Please, please, can't wait no more, this serie is awesome and we all want you to continue
The writing is wonderful. I really get pulled into the story, The writing is wonderful. Characters and setting are superb. thanks and please come back
I really get pulled into the story and cannot wait for you to continue to the next chapter,please come back!!