All Comments on 'Miss. Perfect Wife'

The people in the story were drunk. Were you drunk when you wrote it? There is a lot of disjointed writing going on here. A little more buffing could have really made it shine.

Liked your story, hope to read a sequel

definitely needs to be continued

Nice tease job! I really want to hear more. My wife is your age and bi so I am always thinking about things like your story. Please give me more!

Different than I had expected.

The first paragraph would be a great start for a second story. How did you come to your first bi experience, and what was its effect on you and your husband (and, perhaps, the other woman)? Perhaps the second and third experiences could be included, or serve as the start of other stories. Keep writing!

Wow, hot!

Would love to read the sequel ...